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Poem Number 1166
ok i can no
longer hide behind facade
my love's diminished
Commentary:
My slippers await
The bunny enfolds my foot
Bestiality? ...DRQ
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nope the closest i've come to beastiality is doggy-stlye, woof grrrrrr ..........xcalibur
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behind the door snicker....m4r
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You did better than me m4r, i didn't make it behind the door lol : ).....Tessy
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lolol i Never know what i'll find here! ····· robbynl (whoops, wet'em)
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Who ever you are if you are going to sign my name to your work, can you at least be a bit more creative than what your doing?.....DRQ(who has a little more class than the above comments, and an admirer that likes to use my signature)
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Sorry if my comment offended you, but it was cute and did make me chuckle....m4r(even if you didn't write it)
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DRQ: Two days ago I caught someone doing this to mine (comments) and
when I wrote that I hadn't written it it flew to completed files. Who
ever it was must have been watching. Hope they don't make a practice of this.
--GrandmaThing--What I don't understand is why they can't write under their own
handle. Usually their works are appreciated. May they know love.
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to problem m4r, no offense taken.I just cant understand why some with a creative mind needs to use other name instead of their own.Grandma thing, I guess thats just the way it is......DRQ ;)
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