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Poem Number 1165
Grey shadows shiver
and drums creak in ghostly light
eyes glowing in black soot
Commentary:
looks good on paper then I post it and don't like it :(( another rewrite..
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Grey shadows shiver
Drums creak in ghostly light as
the black soot grows(glows)? eyes....alice who shouldn't have posted this one, until she'd played around more....
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