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Poem Number 1161
radiating pain
endless march across my heart
stop twisting the knife
Commentary:
across your heart, what
about mine? converging pain
and i collect knives......39
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you have more than knives,
string of broken hearts, add mine
collector of souls
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cant collect a soul
belongs not to you, cutting
deeper than you know..........39
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best friend and much more
after all we've discovered
can we start over?
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starting over would
be wonderful, if we leave
yesterday behind..........39
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can't forget the past
help each other learn from it,
forward together
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needing self reform
able to earn back that trust
broken in the past.........39
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fragile hearts needing
each other and gift of time
happy we're not lost
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I learn from you
Together forge ahead
You learn from me...m4r
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Thank you 39, oh if only it were that easy for people to express their
feelings, i enjoyed our tug o war, and m4r-- nicely done......: )rubyredldy (sorry i didn't put my X on it before))
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this was no tug of war rubyredidy, it was a wonderful
conversation and enlightening. thank-you..........39
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this was no tug of war rubyredidy, it was a wonderful
conversation and enlightening. thank-you..........39
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