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Poem Number 1153
drowning in air
It’s gills not yet transformed
Evolution
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drowning in air
silent struggles unseen
another day.....rrl
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m4r and rrl::Glad you two saw this. I didn't have a clue. --GrandmaThing--
May you know love.
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