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Poem Number 1152
sounds that cut silence
between this and the next breath
mother bears a child
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Perfect ending!!!!!I passed it by cause knew I didn't have its words.
--GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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This is just perfect.Great work all of you....m4r
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oh, that's beautiful....great collab....cecily
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I love collabing, and when something comes together like this, it makes it so worthwhile... thanks 39 for your first line inspiration and as GT said Perfect ending DRQ.......alice
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Thank you all, this came together nicely.....DRQ
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i cant take credit for the way this turned out, y'all were one step ahead of me on this one, i even looked for the third line myself just didnt have it. wasnt even close to DRQ's beautiful cap!!!!! God how i love this place........39
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