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Poem Number 1145
A revelation
In mid air--a mountain
We're not meant to climb
Commentary:
I like where the break is here.. 'mid air' was the first thing I read. So many times I make things more difficult for myself and it only hits me in "Mid air"... thanks Mitch enjoyed this one.....alice
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