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Poem Number 1117
friends are shocked i left
"he loved you so very much!"
(on a bed of nails)
Commentary:
ouch
ones love does
not make two happy
third's the charm......39
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can not understand
how so many are decieved
with his boyscout smile
~Q~
i thought i escaped
until i realized, the
bars are internal
~Q~
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