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Poem Number 1110
winter clouds hover
threatening a downpour of
white crystals of fun
Commentary:
perhaps promising would work better than threatening? --dorothy
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promising would work better for those who like the snow. in my case however snow meant work and thats always a threat, should've written white crystals of work, might've fit it better....39
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