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Poem Number 1100
took the shortcut home
through the huckleberry patch
tattletale fingers
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took the shortcut home
through the huckleberry patch
fingers told the tale
~(?)~Quiche~
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I love them both Quiche, but the second one seems to roll off the tongue a little easier for me.... no matter they are both great.......alice who has never been through a huckleberry patch..
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took the shortcut home
through the huckleberry patch
tattletale chiggers .... rl :o)
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thanks alice...i thought the second one flowed better also, but like the idea of the fingers tattletaling...quiche who still thinks alice should come to Michigan with our current 6 inches of snow and summer huckleberries...
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Oh yes please!!! :)..alice
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I like it either way you write it.
opto
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feast before breakfast
flock of bluejays devoured
blueberries--no pies.........
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This year I didn't get enough for a pie-they stripped them clean. Is
that why bluejays are blue? (daughter question at 6)GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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