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Poem Number 1088
Guitar strums softly
A song of old Mexico
Old woman weeps
Commentary:
(Birdman)
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guitar strums softly
calling us to attention
i forget to toke..............RAS
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Guitar strums softly
A song of old Mexico
Woman remembers
~q~
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Thank you Birdman...so full of images........alice
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guitar strums softly
woman,castanets, dancing
feet swirling skirts-you
...TT64
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soft guitar brightly
colored skirts circle for love
too many years past
TT64
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Birdman::This so reminded me of years gone by when my first husband, his
parents and I used to go square-dancing every Saturday night. There's
no feel like that of multilayered petticoats and swirling skirts. Thos
were wonderful times.--GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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Birdman--forgot to say I could also see your" shawled old woman" crying
for those yesteryears that would never return to "her" old Mexico.
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