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Poem Number 1074
wrapped in deception
a glittering masquerade
i untie the bow
Commentary:
ack! i know what i want to say! help me find the words, my talented friends. ~Quiche~
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wrapped in deception
a flattering performance
i fall in the trap
~Quiche~ arrgh!!
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Wrapped in deception
Performance of a lifetime
With me in front row
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Wrapped in deception
Oscar winning performance
Audience of one....m4r
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thanks, m4r, i see you understood where i was trying to take this. having a frustrating night!! ~Q~
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easier to just make a loud slurping sound on a straw, expressed how i feel right now better than i seem to be able to write (sucked in again) LOL ~Q~
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wrapped in deception
performance of a lifetime
only i applaude
~Q~
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Dear Quiche- I think we all get sucked in at one time or another.Sometimes the package is so perfect that we cant see what's inside for the glitze on the outside till it calms down and dulls abit....m4r....Just don't be too hard on yourself.
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thanks m4r...Quiche...who has spent a lifetime being sucked in.
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Guess that makes us both suckers then. I like cherry, what kind do you prefer. May as well get something sweet out of it lol....m4r
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butterscotch :) ~Quiche~
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Quiche::Perhaps the reason you see this as troubling is because
masquerades are put together more tightly than with bows--maybe "untie knot"
more permanent even though more difficult.--MommaThing--May you know love.
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Quiche,
Hang in there. I liked it and those that followed. You have much talent.
opto
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MT, and Opto...fact is my with my writing lately, i feel like i am masquerading as something i am not as well...i think i am falling into that dry place opto is crawling out of. ~Q~
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