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Poem Number 1065
rich wine drenched desire
swirling flow, sensual flood
exquisite journey
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drinking hallowed wine
nectar stains my fevered lips
chalice of pleasure........zendo
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Am I seeing things?
Having a wonderful time
and here comes his wife.
...Space cadet
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have I gone insane?
loving him so very much
yet he has a wife......cecily ;-)...like that one, space cadet
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~~rubyredldy::Your haiku is like your journey.--GrandmaThing--I think you know love.
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Thank you GrandmaThing, yes i am a lucky lady : )......rubyredldy
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