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Haiku - Two


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Poem Number 1020
crisp as the morning
ice crust on white world, soft fluff
waits as children wake


Commentary:
Alice & Quiche--a morning like this does seem to beg for children's
attention. I could see it but wan't sure how to work line 3. Thanks.--
GrandmaThing--May you know love on icy mornings.
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