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Poem Number 2139
bring on the orchids
strewn all across the highway
pedal to petal
. engine cuts and cuts for half a mile

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I like the humor in the last line. It kind of takes you by surprise.
...BR
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someone ran over my orchids. I'm crushed.
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I've crushed a few "orchids" in my day so...
It must be karma. c-belle
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Poem Number 2145
Rubens would have said,
"Gain fifteen and we can talk."
I had no complaints.

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Poem Number 2147
the whispered secret
of the Order of the Sun
drowned by alarm clock

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This one speaks to all my young life on the farm and all my own working life, eritain. We were a family of sleepy heads and not one of us could awaken without a LOUD alarm. Even then we once all slept through it and were awakened finally by the bawling of the uncomfortable cows begging to be milked. All my best, eritain. Lida Jo from Idaho
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Poem Number 2148
Ne absorbeat
In Jubilate Deo
J`aime Acccuse

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Poem Number 2151
Kleptomaniac
Came and stole my heart away
Much belovered thief

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Much beloved thief....BR
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Beautiful, BR. You have evoked the broken heart elegantly. LJ from ID
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Poem Number 2152
Calliope music
Tigers, elephants and clowns
Circus comes to town

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Well done!! Well done!! LJ from ID
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Poem Number 2153
The previous line
hiden under the big top
is elephant crap!

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Poem Number 2154
Irene whips the coast
power boasts her irate winds
y`all gonna get wet

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Excellent image in that second line!! The Haiku works well. Never said better!! LJ from ID
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Thanks Lida its been over 10yrs and so great to see some of the best people I called Family..........classic38
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Lida Jo and classic38!!!!!!!!!! you should contact me. ~Q~ aka Quichemarie @ keasha63@charter.net

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Poem Number 2156
veranda of hope
balconies of days to be
mezzanine of dreams

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Poem Number 2157
pecans all coated
with gayly colored sugar
Christmas memories

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Poem Number 2158
Lapis Lazuli
Latent lollapalooza
Left leaning lizards

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Poem Number 2159
violets tell me
secrets of the dewy morn
gentle words of love

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lovely

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Poem Number 2160
This lovely lady
Makes my heart jump, no reason
We are one for one.

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Poem Number 2161
fanciful feathers
peacock fans his pride proper

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Poem Number 2162
Two people in love
in every way possible
cling to each other

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