
Current poems in progress...
Am I wide asleep
---Jb, Tx
I'm the dream grifter's real mark
---Jb, Tx
Limbo is my home
---Jb, Tx
Enjoyed. Truly brilliant.Add to commentary
What is reality. Could this life be Limbo?
IPP is your home. c-belle
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Thank you very much. I love haiku, it's nice to be able to express so much thought in such a short and sweet manner. JB
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Ah, JB! 'wide asleep' is excellent!! An enviable image. Lida Jo from Idaho.
pictures of lily
---Anonymous
Burned deep in my idle flesh
---Jb, Tx
soothed my wonder years
---Anonymous
A 17-syllable novel. Wish I could read the long version. LJ from IDAdd to commentary
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A 17-syllable novel. Wish I could read the long version. LJ from ID
our midnight tango
---c-belle
consequence will soon be seen
---BR
takes two to tango
---BR
you're right. Three is just plain showing off.Add to commentary
Be that as it may
---Anonymous
For they say that Truth will out
---BR
And God is seven
---Anonymous
R2D2 said
---Anonymous
Astro droids do it better
---Anonymous
Ping Ping Ping Poing
---Anonymous
The Jitterati
---Anonymous
Parading Hoxton, Dalston,
---Anonymous
I need: maps, caffeine!
---eveywordmeanslove
Winter joy
---Anonymous
Bleak winter morningAdd to commentary
Color lost in maze of gray
Oh! A cardinal!
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One of the best haikus I've seen. I know what the winter day looked like. That sudden flash of red of the cardinal is like a ray of sunshine.
...BR
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Beautiful, BR!! Excellent understated elegance!! Can't Haiku better than that! Lida Jo from Idaho
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I didn't write this, I only commented on it. Wish I could claim it, but, I can't!
...BR
Seven red setters
---Anonymous
Seen slowly stalking swaybacks
---classic38
Today a poet
---Lida Jo from Idaho
scarred me forever in verse
---Lida Jo from Idaho
I may never heal
---Lida Jo from Idaho
That last line is weak since if one is scarred forever one cannot heal.Add to commentary
Wish I had said:
may it serve me well
Lida Jo from Idaho
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You are an insightful self-editor, Lida Jo. --eritain
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It seems so good to see some new activity here. A few years ago it was a busy site.
...BR
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I love the "may it serve me well". -everywordmeanslove
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So good to be back to the folks that inspire my dribble, Bless You All.....classic38
This morning
---mofaha
Beneath the wiper blade
---mofaha
One crisp brown leaf
---mofaha
Great. Gives me the feeling of late Autumn in New Hampshire.Add to commentary
...BR
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Thanks for the comment BR
Late Autumn in New Jersey, you were so close :)
My lifes mistakes are
---classic38-51, in Missouri now
Finally behind me now
---classic38-51, in Missouri now
All thats left is life
---classic38-51, in Missouri now
Glad you've reached that point in life. Wish I could.Add to commentary
...BR
if i surrender
---mice elf
then a traitor`s born again
---classic38
feminism is
---Dube
not obsolete when you talk
---Dube
oblivious fool
---Dube
clear pane separates
---Dube
fierce elements from stale
---Dube
air blocking lungs
---Dube