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Poem Number 4983
A trampy old tramp
His clothes are umpteen years old
His toes must be cold
Commentary:
a hoary old whore
with pants three sizes too tight
her lips must be cold
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take the tramp shopping
buy him some socks and some shoes
maybe a haircut
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take the whore whoring
make her pay for her own damn
socks, shoes and haircut
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take a hoe hoeing
pluck the weeds from her garden
maybe mow her grass
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