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Poem Number 4978
your real hair is
prettier than you think
so's your real face
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i really like this; words not expressed often enough
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this is really touching
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Thanks, both of you. If anyone sees a way to make this ku shorter and more pointed (gentle, but pointed), or more graceful, please speak up. It's sort of my manifesto, and I want it to be a good one. --eritain
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hilltop city
she believes in who He made her
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God's real you
can't be improved--He
makes the best.
~
Grandma Bea-May you know love!
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Eritain--So my first husband used to think of women--sure wish I had believed him.--BeaHeller-Knapp(GrandmaThing)
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