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Poem Number 4970
sitting on the loo
it becomes clear what i have
in common with you


Commentary:
BenDover__or Ben Dover--or BenD over as most can hear this name.
I surely hope you are not making fun of this writer whom some
consider to have a good site.--GrandmaBea--BHellerKnapp--
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pardon??
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if i must accompany every submission with a [disclaimer] i warrant i will become quite despondent. i had thought this crude haiku to be quite clever, even though it was not about
 
biscuits and breadloaves
red sunsets and butterflies
on moms checkered cloth
 
perhaps i could have written it to be more inspirational if i had allotted it more thought ... but i wrote it off the top of my head which ain't got much to work with anyhoo...let's allow me give it another try, thank you. i.e.
 
all men great and small
have been in my cubicle
- sitting on the loo
 
~[Benjamin Dover] which is not my real name, but was a [perhaps lame] attempt to let the reader know i did not intend the context to be taken seriously by anyone.
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