robin's blue egg shell
lies broken within the nest
it begins again

rvenghost, excellent work! The picture you paint in the first two lines are wonderfully done. I almost wanted you to replace 'it' with whatever 'it' represents, but upon second thought, the choice of the more obscure pronoun instead of the blatant noun leaves more room for the imagination. Memorable haiku. Lida Jo from Idaho (and now Big O for Oregon)
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This is a very good haiku, you are skilled (whoever wrote this). Anyway, I think that you should take your skill farther and find a lifestyle that includes writing poetry for a living. You are a poet and I doubt you knew it. Okay unlike the poem before this, this is GREAT!!! Don't forget that in Haiku, there are 3 lines. The first has 5 syllables, then 7, and then 5 again. Good Luck on your poem included life. J from jersey
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This is a very good haiku, you are skilled (whoever wrote this). Anyway, I think that you should take your skill farther and find a lifestyle that includes writing poetry for a living. You are a poet and I doubt you knew it. Okay unlike the poem before this, this is GREAT!!! Don't forget that in Haiku, there are 3 lines. The first has 5 syllables, then 7, and then 5 again. Good Luck on your poem included life. J from jersey