ring aroung the roses
sun ripened cheeks
ribbons and bare feet dance

typo and possible Ku crime.
"ring AROUND the roses"
6'4'6 im not sure if that Ku to you.
.dra
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ring around roses
sun ripened cheeks and ribbons
bare feet are dancing

..just a suggestion to adapt your lovely Haiku the classical way……
-blunder-

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thanks...-blunder-
"ring around the roses" and "hot calaloo (bare footed dance)" were game commonly played as a younger girl in Jamaica Im not sure if children worldwide play it. just in case it needs some cultural clarification...dra
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heeey blunder's one really is nicer on second look..thanks .dra