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Poem Number 4834
cold sweat-covered steel
lies stubbornly immobile
absorbs all my strength....david
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muscle head,
and friend
:)
.dra
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delicate flowers
long stems curve around garbage
soft colors contrast...david
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whats that supposed to mean?
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i'm not telling....david
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hm! :| .dra
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ok. i was trying to make a garden outside an old factory we converted to a theater and living space. this was about a big piece of metal on the ground.
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oh ok thanks..:-D i was thinking deeper than that...
have fun..dra
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that poem is tight though.
.dra
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David, this is excellent drawing all kinds of images on the canvas of one's thoughts. Beautifully done! Thank you. Lida Jo from Union, O.
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