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Poem Number 4801
Butterflies....
Commentary:
some little haiku's
flickering like butterflies
never get to rest
-blunder-
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and this is one of those, blunder. i've enjoyed watching it bound from petal to petal in my minds eye. keep on writing 'em. nice!
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Blunder: If you want your haiku to find rest post it at a number--
commentary haiku don't go into "author".--GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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Thanks GrandmaThing--May you know love!, but that issue is not important to me, the knowledge that someone read my work and sometimes like it (like your nice comment indicates) is a reward that's quite enough for me. -blunder-
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