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Poem Number 4788
Strong...
FIRM
DING DONG
i love my ding dong
Commentary:
Most Haiku's are strong
Some though are vulnerable
And don't want to play
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so true! so true!
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Yes, I met that one
Loitering in a hayfield
I snipped her harp strings
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Figuring our minds
From sunrays they are woven
Flowers of the spring
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