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Poem Number 4782
Flaiku
A Haiku
A Muddy
Little
Pond
It's
Chester
And Hester
Come to Wave A Magic Wand
Commentary:
blue fly rests
waits enlightenment
flyswatter
-
crashes down
flyswatter misses
blue fly flies
-
blue fly lands
flyswatter hunts him
smelling blood
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blue fly tastes
dust on the window
with his feet
-
delicious
dust shitty window
restaurant
-
swish through air
impact vibration
need Windex
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