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Poem Number 4780
where is the critic?
he closed my rectum poem
his mom's rectum rocks
Commentary:
Your sloppy rectum
Can be pulled over your head
No one will notice
-jorstruly-
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Very astute reply.
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Move your sloppy tongue
and I will fill your request
your mom has bad roids
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Even more astute!
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