attractive drinker
repeats exact discussion
as last time we met...david

hip friends disappear
replacing me with strangers
intrigued with unknown...david
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nervously slam beers
mute, pose casu'lly staring
hope for connection...david
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stranger's mouth on me
cannot stop lustful onslaught
gladly victimized...david
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alone, exit bar
surroundings change completely
suddenly urban...david
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almost no traffic
silent cab meanders home
must keep eyes open...david
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face rests on right hand
elbow against chilled window
sudden bumps startle...david
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muffled soul music
permeates cold night silence
until light changes....david
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impressive!
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Nice visuals, David!--TT67-May you know love!
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Great job David. Nothing like taking us there the haiku-way! ~Q~
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good sequence of events but why did he have to go home lonely.
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yeah why lonely? WE WANT ALTERNATE ENDING!!!...haha!
welcome to the age of the DVD..
dra