The glow of the moon
With its serenade of love
We walk on the air
and we float like a winged dove
music worth listen
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sing into the air
glowing with loves serenade
we walk on the moon.
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Alternative last lines?
We walk on a beam
We sway in the air
We catch up its glow
We glow with the moon
(but the original final line is OK!)
-blunder-
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my version:
 
The glow of the moon
With its serenade of love
Makes drunk men stagger
-sancho panza
heheheh :)
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as moon's glow shines through
parts clouds-sings loves serenade
walk-lighter than air
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GrandmaThing-May you know love!
Birdman--very nice writing!
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Hey DAD,
I really enjoyed this one. It probably one of my favorties that you have written. I hop you are taking care fo yourself. I love ya lots.... Keep writing beautiful poetry pop!
Love
SARA MAE
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Birdman,
This poem is amazing. I just wanted to tell you that your writing lights a fire inside of me. I wish I could get at a man like you. I bet you are this hopeless romantic who only wants true love and happiness out of life. Well I could give ya that and more. WINK WINK* your secret admirer,
Amelia