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Poem Number 4708
Oak leaf ground cover
Carpets summers' greenery
Till someone rakes up
Commentary:
Very good!
how well i can see
your virtual natural scenes
on flickering screen
-blunder-
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RDGhostPoet: Funny! I can see "oak leaves" as military officers over not so old
recruits ---then someone makes a killing.--Sorry to mess up your lovely fall haiku.
--GrandmaThing-May you know love!
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