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Poem Number 4693
Zippo lights lick thin riza paper
thick fingers fumbling
cold dark december morning burns
(rizla, ouch!!!
Commentary:
Dear Anonymous
You should try to read the rules
And quit smoking *cough*
-blunder-
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Rules? What rules are they
that we have abide to
when we write our stuff?
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Of course you're allowed
To write whatever you like
But do it elsewhere…
-jorstruly-
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