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Poem Number 4691
Ownership is theft
truer words were never spoke
and now,I'm speechless.


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Ownership is theft
Truer words never spoken
And now, I'm speechless.

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you may be correct,but I wonder if it really matters?
Is it poor grammar?I dunno.
-everywordmeansnonplussed
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own my possessions?
always labored for their gifts
question thievery
* ThisThing67-May you know love!
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You question the theft?
You hypocrite! The only
gift you have are WORDS!
(of which they are stolen)
-e.w.m.f.
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Someone quick!
Put an APB out on my stolen words!
And then in poetic justice judge, by shoving them down the thief's throat.
Then give me newer words,that NO one will take.

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everywordmeansfuck:: As far as I know--I have never willingly copied anyones
words. I make copies of everything I write on their originals and wherever
I post them so If Ann Cantelow doesn't have copies of my words here---I DO!!
GrandmaThing/GrandmaBea,judiblu66,Marie you want anymore?

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Dearest GrandmaThing
Ignore that no good bastard
He's just harassing
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Cause he knows for sure
That he's unable to beat
Us decent poets
-blunder-

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You are both mistaken in your interpretation of my words,and I am probably going to be considered even MORE heinous in your judgement because I have to explain it to you:
I only meant that there are no such things as original ideas.I was attempting to express the deep paradox of poetry that exists when a writer tries to lay claim to "an original idea".
I,for one,do not believe in the possibility of anything new under the sun.
You two,on the other hand,may of course believe as you wish.
It was not my intent to defame or persecute you,GrandmaThing,but rather,to simply communicate an idea based on my understandings of human nature,and I ask forgiveness if the haiku provoked you negatively.
I knew it was provocative,but I never meant the negative connotations.Sometimes to get at the truth,I guess one must risk offending others.
I hope this does not mean YOU.
-e.w.m.f.
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Dear e.w.m.f.
Is this what you are telling us?
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"I am always right -
Though no one understands me"
(Bad potty training?)
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-blunder-
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This is what I'm telling you blunder:
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Do not take offense
at words that provoke your ire
but rather,your OWN.
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-everywordmeansfuck
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Yes, definitely bad potty training!
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ewmf: Well, here I am apologizing again. That stealing bit goes both ways
like a double-edged sword of Damocles, it doesn't take much of an edge to
cut. Wasn't it the Beetles who sang, "For Every Season-Turn, Turn" stolen
right from "theword". There is nothing new under the sun-words come and they go
they change and remain the same. I am sure we have stolen all of the
"originals" of the fine Japanese authors who developed haiku- unknowingly,
of course. Please, don't leave because of my comments I really do enjoy
dueling with you. On Guard!--WHOIAM
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It was the Byrds who stole from the Bible
and Ecclesiastes was the egg they laid
although it is known that John ate grubs of Beatles
in the desert,and that may account for why
Paul is dead,cuz maybe he ate him?

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