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Poem Number 4634
How peaceful life is
Without that e.w.m.f.
As long as it lasts…
Commentary:
Aw that's cruel :c
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What compelled you to say this about me?
The last thing I want is to be HATED.
Sorry if I offended you somehow.
-e.w.m.f.
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... no, it's just that it is so peaceful when you don't come clamping around these fragile flowerbeds with those clumsy feet and that big loudmouth of yours. like I read elsewhere: please calm down and show other submitters some respect by giving the rest of us some space as well!
-blunder-
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With all due respect,I see no lack of space for you,and you can post anything you want...and I wasn't aware of any flowerbeds here,also...as far as my loud mouth is concerned,well,you ain't convinced me...just cause you dont like what I write is no reason to attack me.I'm sure there are people who detest what YOU have to say,as well....it's all subjective....
That's as close to an apology that you'll get from me.
-everywormeansfuck
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... hadn't expected anything else so thank you...
-blunder-
One day very soon
We'll have peace in our valley
And no space in 'roughs'
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There are five haiku salons and five of each other kind of salon, other than rough, which should only have one imho. So, in the immortal words of the Stooges, or whoever said it, "Spread out".
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blunder you'd rather people shut up and write than talk to each other? we can talk/argue/chat as much as we like: that's what 'free' speech is all about
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… and I'm not stopping anyone, on the contrary. But when I observe that one single contributor as regards submissions and comments (with a very variable quality in my opinion) represent up to 30% of the material, I react negatively. Maybe that person needs twice as much space as the rest of us …?
-blunder-
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You're complaining about MORE than lack of space,because the "lack of space" idea is LAUGHABLE! What you seem to REALLY be complaining about is the "variable quality" of my submissions,and that's fine with me.I'm not writing for your sole pleasure,blunder...get over it,and instead of complaining,critique the poems of mine you LIKE,and reasons WHY,that way I'll hit the mark more accurately in the future...In the meantime,I'm gonna go into author search and see what you have written of importance lately...will you be embarrassed at any:"variable quality" therein?
Hope not.Check ya later,blun...
-everywordmeansfuck
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How peaceful life was
Without that e.w.m.f.
It did not last long...
-blunder-
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blunder maybe you should begin the Comittee for Equal Percentage Rating of Commentary per Unit Web Space (CEPROCUWS) to ensure that each author here contributes exactly their fair share, don't you agree that's the best solution?
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That's a very good idea! And I guess you are the chairman of the Committee For Witty Comments From Anonymous Submitters (C.F.W.C.F.A.S.) or is it maybe the subcommittee Easy World More Friendship (E.W.M.F)?
-blunder-
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No, the PWLPTUTA (People Without Large Painful Things Up Their Asses)...;)
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Hey Blunder,I got two more things to say to you:
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1) I liked some of the poems you wrote when I checked you out in the 'Author Search',but you need to write more!(LOL)
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2) I am going to start writing under new pseudonyms from now on,so that you'll be unable to tell that it is ME who is writing them.The moment you post a commentary that is positive and/or praising,I'll make a big deal out of it and EMBARRASS the SHIT out of you,you belgian waffle!
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peaceout my brutha!
-everwordmeanswhackamole
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Oh how great you are!
I’ll commit Hara-kiri,
…but where is my sword…?
-blunder-
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I 'carry' your 'hair'
in a blunderous basket
touché the toupeé!
-Et tu,Brute?
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You're self-destructive,
Calm down and relax your soul
Under cherry trees
-blunder-
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Give it a
break! there is much more
to our life
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Hey...this is the bodyguard for the defenseless poetry lovers, stop saying negative things. Got Negativity? Got Issues? go to the Gothic/surreal salon.But leave darlings alone...
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I was expressin love as best I could....no negativity from me,I promise.Connotation means everything,I guess....context,as well....
-e.w.m.f.
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