The well known poet
Who found immortality
Had no audience

hi .oeg, nice haiku again, see you around!
Cause all that he wrote
Was too good for this world
And he left us in pain
-blunder-
(5-6-6 may not be the perfect haiku-form but sounds good in my ears)
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.oeg--Very inteesting! I am just reading the 5 book series by David Eddings
"The Belgariad" which has 3 sorcerers--one over 7000 years old. This haiku
is so relevant to me right now. Thanks!
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-blunder- Your haiku could use what your ID does---the space for emphasis!
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Cause all that he wrote
Was much too good for this world
---he left us--in pain
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judiblu66
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Hey, just thinking those same words, fool (I'm in a Mr. T mood)
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Thanks blunder and judiblu. I enjoy Haiku but it is generally too challenging for me to create ... thus i was surprised when this one came to me. I hope it wasn't lifted from somewhere in the recesses of my memory where i have read it in the past...which is entirely possible. :)
 
Hey Blunder, that is an enjoyable haiku you have added, you should thank Judiblu66 for editing it's structure. It speaks by itself well. Judi is correct about leaving the space to emphasize the pain i think. (---he left us--in pain )
 
all the best,
.oeg
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Judiblu66, I am thankful! You made a good job on that one. May we see one or a few of your own?
-blun-der-
PS Your Haiku is excellent .oegy keep'm coming!