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Poem Number 4606
Tender moments, set in permanent devices. Memories trapped for a lifetime.
Loving thoughts of a time not yet spent with invisible lovers, touching self in tender places.
Only momentary satisfaction for a desire never quenched!
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tender moments set
memories trapped for lifetime
permanent devices
*--TT67using your words.
momentary time
love-invisible lover
desires unquenched
*TT67 for April---you can do them-you have some great ideas.
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oooppps!!Please take the "s" off devices. GrandmaThing
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