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Poem Number 4589
Country trumpets rust
must the August wind blow so?
Rain turns the gold red.
Commentary:
as our praise grows thin
winds of war stir increase
bombs spent innocence
**TT67-May we show love!
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Thought this over. I rewrote line 3 as "spend" to make it an on-going
task, not just a "done-deed".
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as our praise grows thin
winds of war stir increase
bombs spend innocence
**TT67-May we show love!
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citizens retort
august leaders shout decide
innocence no vote
**TT67-May we show love!
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I thank you for that
what you write is beautiful
I nod in assent.
-e.w.m.f.
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Thank you E.W.M.F! You do make me think!--GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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