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Poem Number 4584
Feel his steely gaze
hot/cold magnetic power
I must walk away...
It's ball / bald within
Commentary:
after we try the walk
magnetism non-affect
another funny
* TT67-May you know love!
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Oops! sorry about line 1
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once we try that walk
magnetism non-affect
another funny?
* TT67-May you know love!
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Eeks! Dictionary before write, Bea.--ok ok
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once we try that walk
his magnetism non-affect
another funny?
*TT67-May you know love and better haikuing than this lady.
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