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Poem Number 4570
A haiku zen Q
Where does the bodhi end,
(and)
my body begin?


Commentary:
Alternately,I had originally thought of these variations:
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A haiku zen Q:
Where does the pop can end,and
my body begin?
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A haiku koan:
Where does the question end,and
the answer begin?
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any comments as to which may be better?
be careful...it's a trap!
Muah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!
-everywordmeansfuck
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Alternately,I had originally thought of these variations:
---
A haiku zen Q:
Where does the pop can end,and
my body begin?
---
A haiku koan:
Where does the question end,and
the answer begin?
---
any comments as to which may be better?
be careful...it's a trap!
Muah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!
-everywordmeansfuck
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A haiku zen Q:
Are you a real nut man
Or just pretending
-blunder-

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You may call him Mr.Peanut(everywordmeanslegume)
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or pee nut?
-jorstruly-
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cola can in hand
mere extention of person
can you know the real
*
ThisThing-66
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I speak literal,
and not figuratively:
the pop can IS me!
(-e.w.m.f.)
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minds read different
everything/everything else
extent overlap
*
(C)9-09-02 by ThisThing63/66 Bea
Happy seperating!
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everywordmeans....:I wanted to use "dimension" instead of "extent" but it
was too long, as they usually are. How many years in a dimension anyhow?
I still see overlap.-GrandmaThing-May you know love!
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CtAhNe oYvOeUr lSaTpInLoLw gSraEnEdma Thing?
if so,tell me,k?
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(one mutha of a haiku....from you know who)

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Julie Knows But Understand This NoAmoun Talk URges ALong Loves Yearnings!
GrandmaThing-May you know love!
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Grandma gets last word
but I'm okay with that,cuz....
Everywordmeansfuck!
(just bein ornery,GrandmaThing,just bein ornery...)
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Grandma gets last word
but I'm okay with that,cuz....
Everywordmeansfuck!
(just bein ornery,GrandmaThing,just bein ornery...)
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