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Poem Number 4562
Torrid immense pain
Clinging to His garments hem
Trusting Him to heal.
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Sometimes the intensity of your poems is just devastating, honey. This is beautifully done. The repetition of the breathed 'h' sound is very effective. Most of the time we don't consciously choose these things, they are just there, but so effective as if with every breath He is nearer. LJ
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