fading twilight sky
silouettes the praising trees -
arms lifted Heav'ward

I can see this scene,
love the praising trees.
Excellent. Starr.
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aawwww---I was gonna say that!!! (Even though Dr. Vu had said we were not
to use the "ing" on words.) Who was Dr. Vu anyhow and where did he/she go I
wonder. --Baby Sis.-May you know love!
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Wow, I remember that ID, dr.vu manchu, picked us apart like mice in the rice paddy, even mrs.vu chimed her two yen in..........Noah Body

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I miss the Drs. Vu. I like it when someone can tell a poet exact things to fix. I didn't know about 'ing' being something that doesn't belong in Haiku. It would have to do with Japanese grammar, but I am a purist at heart, though not in outcome. Lida Jo
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I miss the Drs. Vu. I like it when someone can tell a poet exact things to fix. I didn't know about 'ing' being something that doesn't belong in Haiku. It would have to do with Japanese grammar, but I am a purist at heart, though not in outcome. Lida Jo
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Starr and Baby Sis, thank you for your comments. They mean the world to me. Lida Jo