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Poem Number 4529
Regretful hard words
Her tears will not stop showing
Until the rain falls
Commentary:
Blunder, Sweden: Perhaps as a gentleman, you could kiss them away???? Glad
to see you writing here. -GrandmaThing-May you know love!
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thx Grandma
maybe the raindrops just hide her tears that keeps coming?
was I there I would certainly have kissed them away!
-blunder-
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Blunder, Sweden, I have enjoyed the things you have posted - both single lines and full poems. Beautifully put!! Lida Jo
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