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Poem Number 4528
My lover is gone
"The Cure-Disintegration"
now! I want her back.
Commentary:
She has gone away-
to tend to her mother,some.
now,:my selfish want.
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she should come back soon,
I need her to say goodbye.
Now,I know I'm smote!
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It is getting late
nearing the deadline for me...
NOW,I NEED YOU NOW!
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Know that my patience
wanes like the face of Robert-
now on the cover.
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Mr.Smith....Mr.
Sad,English,song-man,sing me
now:"Pictures of you"
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So that I can be
As wan as the fool moon,too
Now,"song" her back here!
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And I wait and wait,
and I wait and wait and wait,
-now all the songs die.
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Now is not the time
I cannot bear this waiting:
now trapped in space/time.
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Know now my lover
all of you who read my words:
Now she is not me!
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-everywordmeansfuck
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Your Haiku's suck all day!...Space Cadet
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No,they dont./-everywordmeansfuck.
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You're right Everyword, they don't.
Oh Space Cadet! Some Haikus for us. Please!!!!
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No Space Cadet..Everyword is a human wonder. I want to meet this wonderful mouthful of a poet.every?? Do you still write? Pleaseeee find me..and let's talk poetry and Haiku....aprilp37@aol.com
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