beneath your skin you
soft, a canola petal
flushed red with your blood

..the excitement of love on a well oiled (cared for) body? --Nicely said.
This really sent my mind buzzing cause I could not find "canola" and I was
wondering if it is a mixture, for I can also see a damaged body in death.
Extremes well written here. Thanks for the mental exercise!-GrandmaThing-
May you know love!
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Because I was so unfamiliar with "canola" I did a word search for same.
I learned that originally it was from the rapeseed. This gives me
an entirely new picture of your haiku. Very interesting haiku. Thanks.
Learning something new--for me today---has been accomplished.--GrandmaThing-
May you know love!
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Nice detective work,Grandma,I was also curious bout the canola thing,but what is rapeseed?
-eerywordmeanslove(there is THAT better?!?! LOL)
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Not the oil, the flower. Canola is my favorite flower. I was writing this about myself.
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well,bugger us ALL,then! You've robbed us of the pleasure.THIEF!...THIEF!
-everywordmeansfuck.
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AAAh (screams and runs away).
:)