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Poem Number 4438
Spring slips daintily in
on the hem
of winter's coat.....
Commentary:
Very, very nicely worded, although not quite a haiku.
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I accept the slap on the wrist.It is actually the beginning of a poem I wrote, it just came to my mind at that moment and like Spring it just slipped in! Sharza.
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so beautifully worded, I love this. I believe this is a hybrid, a cross between a haiku and a senryu--amethyst
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