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Poem Number 4291
ivy covered house
almost no bricks visible
loud walls chirp and scream....david
spirits in white lace
SMILING, RECALLING THE PAST.....
what happened to love?
Commentary:
David, I don't think I would want to lean on those walls!!!EEK! ~Green
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I see the cottage of long ago past and the vision is very calm and serene....m4r
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The poem is now exquisite and complete. I see aging, gracious southern belles in ruined mansion, gently living in the past, happily recalling lovers and good times.
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Love. Crap. Cliche.
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ivy furled ruins
ancient bones reaching for clouds
shackles of his story~quietchild
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