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Poem Number 4263
the times are changing
planes fly very low and fast
pieces of people


Commentary:
I think you are an unsensitve prick who cant see that the world is in turmoil. osama bin laden
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Do you imagine you're being funny?
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I attempted to capture the realism of the events. Whilst some of us lay comfortably back in our lazy boys enjoying the "excitement" of current events on shows like "good morning america". Others spend this time pondering the gravity of it all, and attempting to localize reality. Ar?
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Don't know....maybe I been outa touch too long but I got an image of people passing in the wake of the plane as only an image of someone going somewhere fast as opposed to slow as in the horse and buggy days....m4r
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this poem is...chunky. thats how it makes me feel.
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