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Poem Number 4253
Orange heart Napalm fire
Stale Piss Sodium light Glare
Blank gaze of desire
Commentary:
Not a serene Haiku at all
Not even counted out right but discordant on purpose
Should be closed - CM
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I like it - u shd extend and post as a poem...Oz
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A low moan
By the old temple
Orange skies fade
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