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Poem Number 4241
No poetry here
Today I am so empty
Broken pottery


Commentary:
Hey CM your ku really touched me...You're really good at this...Oz
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The poet is the poetry.Look within yourself,something always comes about.Sometimes a little slower than others.Nice ku...sad...:)V
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For me writing Haiku is really more of a meditative experience than poetry. I'm fortunate that they seem to come out somewhat legible most of the time. - CM
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pieces of his heart
lie on the apartment floor
door slams behind her...:)V
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Pieces of his life
Sit in an old wooden box
Like moldering bones - CM
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There was a comment elsewhere about what's left behind when you die. A fiddle case with a broken fiddle and a wallet with a loosing Irish Sweeps ticket is all my great grandfather left. I don't even think I'll leave that much. Just these little bytes that will be gone all too soon
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