The Interactive Poetry Pages
Haiku
Show authors
for all the poetry lines.
Top Welcome Page for the Interactive Poetry Pages.
Poem Number 4234
clustered blue-grey clouds
are topped with glistened pink light
tomorrow should bring joy
~~
~~GT
Commentary:
What lovely optimism! I miss the pink in the sky as it is winter here in Australia, GT. I think this is like a true Ku should be, a message within a message, maybe just change the last line to: Tomorrow bring joy xxxOz.
-------
Right you are Oz! I wasn't counting. In my wordpad it was,
"tomorrow bring joy?"--May you know love, GrandmaThing.
Add to commentary
Unless specifically noted otherwise, copyrights for all lines entered belong to the authors only.
Show authors
for all the poetry lines.
Return to current poems in progress.
Completed Poems.
Top Welcome Page for the Interactive Poetry Pages.
Send a general comment to the web author, or view some of the comments left by others.
Thanks in advance for any feedback you can pass on.
Disruption report - Please choose this link to report any disruptive or offensive entries, or closing sprees, if they appear. Thank you.
Brought to you by Ann Cantelow.