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Poem Number 4230
devorce's discourse
shatters these crystal angels
crystalized pieces
Commentary:
found, faintly beating
scattered among the papers
my child's broken heart ..............~Q~
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cold,clinging questions
still my memories slipping
anwsers hard to grip
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~Q~, I loved your ku. Welcome back, I missed your poems :) Oz
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Thanks for the welcome Oz...how are the solo salons, haven't had time to make it up there since I've been back. I haven't written much either, except the little bit you see here. Almost did last night but got too tired. I think there might be a poem in here somewhere. Stay tuned ;)
I'll have to sneek up to Solo and see what you have written lately. You always amaze me. Nice to see you here in Haikuland! ~Q~
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Oh, never a dull moment in the solo salons...never a dull moment in this crazy head of mine, shooting from idea to idea. Looking forward to reading your poems...I like it here in Haikuland except, of course, for the fact that I always have a lot more than 17 syllables worth of stuff to say...always did talk too much...Ciao for now my friend...Oz :)
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LOL Oz, it sounds like it would be dangerous for the two of us to get together...with our minds shooting from idea to idea and both of us rapid talkers...don't know if we would accomplish much but we certainly would cover a lot of topics....~the Queen of Digression ~Q~
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It sounds like a wonderful idea should you ever get here or me there...we'll talk a whole country to death..ha! Oz
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Sometime we should try a phone call and see if either of us can hear the other talking above their own voice, hehe....~Q~
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even an email...look what we've done to this commentary space - we'll block the whole of cyberspace :) Oz
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strangers sharing smiles
common sense\coincidence
i may never know~quiet child
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quiet child
has so much to say
keep writing..............i always love your poetry quietchild...~Q~
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thanks ~Q~ for the support
insecurites
till her words ensuring me
it still safe to speak~quiet child
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safer to speak here
where we can be friends and still
we remain hidden.......................~Q~
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words never enough
with soul's empty sentences
we remain hidden~quietchild
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