The Interactive Poetry Pages

Haiku


Show authors for all the poetry lines.
Top Welcome Page for the Interactive Poetry Pages.
Poem Number 4227
Home to my baby
Cross the wide Missisipi
Some old lonesome day
*************************************
Now that we're apart
I've got a right to sing the blues
Blues right from my heart
*************************************
I'm goin away
Gonna fint the gal I love
On that sweet sweet day
*************************************
How it rained that day
The sky was as black as hell
All day monday blues
*************************************
Just like shootin stars
On the day that I met you
Love will have it's day
*************************************
While I'm waiting here
My broken heart is singing
Lover please come back
*************************************
What's the matter now?
The sun went down today
Gonna rise up again
*************************************
Got that bad feeling
She don't love me anymore
Now that we're apart
*************************************


Commentary:
It's the true blues baby
-------
Very cool blues haiku. Hope to read many many more of your poems :)
Jurnee
-------
Jurnee, it's the blues babe:( You don't wanna sing the blues all day long.
Add to commentary


Unless specifically noted otherwise, copyrights for all lines entered belong to the authors only.
Show authors for all the poetry lines.
Return to current poems in progress.
Completed Poems.
Top Welcome Page for the Interactive Poetry Pages.
Send a general comment to the web author, or view some of the comments left by others.
Thanks in advance for any feedback you can pass on.
Disruption report - Please choose this link to report any disruptive or offensive entries, or closing sprees, if they appear. Thank you.

Brought to you by Ann Cantelow.