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Poem Number 4216
humidity fights
breatheable air makes skin feel
like, "Let's hit the beach!"
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==GT


Commentary:
Water refresh me
remove the weariness of
lifes constant struggles...Oz.

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ah! just know the peace
cool water caresses skin
focus life again
....GrandmaThing---thanks, Oz.
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may u always know peace & love GT - beautiful addition xxxOz
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Love the beach.Hermit crabs are fun to play with,as they try so hard to get away.We let them go when we're through.Making sand castles with the kids is alot of fun.Gotta go again sometime.Thanks...:)V
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sand castles demand
blue crabs defend her as knights
defiant they stand...:)V
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